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a letter to one of my dearest friend

a letter to one of my dearest friend LGKOr

dear lisa, hello, hope to be perfect and be safe and sound, i really miss you and your lovely family and wants to appreciate you all for making me that memorable holiday. your family wae so kind and the whether was dreamy. last night after driving all way to home i sat on the sofa and call for a pizza. when delivery arrived i found that i have no idea about where my wallet is really is. so started to looking every where in that brief time. suddenly i remember a blur picture of my wallet on your desk. and found that i left it behind. All of my identity cards is there too. So it will be your kindness if post it back to me to this further address: 15-2coned street – ralf aveniue- Isfahan- iran Also My postal code is: 08933213211 Thanks in advance and hope to see you as soon as possible. Regards mehra

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDear
dear
Possible spelling mistake found.LisaLISAlistvisaLimaPisa
lisa
,

hello, hope to be perfect and be safe and sound, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
really
 miss you and your lovely family and wants to appreciate you all for making me that memorable holiday. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYour
your
 family Possible spelling mistake found.waswewaywarwavewage
wae
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 kind and the whether was dreamy. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLast
last
 night after driving all way to home Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 sat on the sofa and call for a pizza. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 delivery arrived Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 found that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 about where my wallet is really
 is. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to looking Did you mean "everywhere"?everywhere
every where
 in that brief time. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSuddenly
suddenly
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 remember a blur picture of my wallet on your desk. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 found that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 it behind. All of my identity cards is there too. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 it will be your kindness if post it back to me to this further
 address:

15-2coned street Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
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ralf
Possible spelling mistake found.avenue
aveniue
- IsfahanPossible spelling mistake found.-i ran- Iran- ran- iron- Iraq- IRA
- iran


Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 My postal code is: 08933213211

Thanks in advance and hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Regards Possible spelling mistake found.Mehran
mehra

IELTS letter a letter to one of my dearest friend

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

156 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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