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You want to work as a teacher in the University

You want to work as a teacher in the University G3P5B
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of an English teacher at the University of Stetson in New York which was advertised in The Herald of 24 th May. I graduated from Uzbek State World Language University in 2010. I have been working in school N18 as a teacher for 11 years. Furthermore, I hold some certificates in English language such as TOEFL and C1 level from IELTS. Also, l can speak English fluently and some Russian. I work well under pressure and believe in encouraging all the pupils to reach their potential. I have enclosed a copy of my CV. I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ann Jonson.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of an English teacher at the University of Stetson in New York which
was advertised
in The Herald of
Did you mean "24th"?
24 th
May.

I graduated from Uzbek State World Language University in 2010.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been working in school N18 as a teacher for 11 years.
Furthermore
, I hold
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some
certificates in English language such as TOEFL and C1 level from IELTS.

Also
, l can speak English
fluently
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Russian.

I work well under pressure and believe in encouraging all the pupils to reach their potential.

I have enclosed a copy of my CV.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ann Jonson.
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IELTS letter You want to work as a teacher in the University

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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