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- advice about studing this course - give detail of your course took at university - explain why you recommand this university - give some advice about how to apply

- advice about studing this course - give detail of your course took at university - explain why you recommand this university - give some advice about how to apply b3Bk3

Hi dear Maryam, I'm writing this to give some advice about AI course at Ferdoosi University that I took in last summer. This cource contains 50 hours of teorical sessions in class and 50 hours practical practices in lab. All students have some home works to do for both type of sessions. Also some base knowledge needed to sign. I have to mention that there was an basic exam for signup which all students should pass to allow talk this course. This course helped me a lot because I don't have any practical knowledge in artifical inteligents. in fact we learn how to implement a simple app using a software with algoritem of AI. As you know Ferdoosi university is one of the best Universities in the east, and teachers are selected with high accuracy. I mean all teachers have high knowledge and are very patient when you don't get the topic. I also have some advice for you. be sure to read AI's books which we passed in our time. And also do'nt be nerveous for signup exam; it is very easy. and finally do your best in course time and ask all questions you have from teachers. keep in touch amir aliakbari

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IELTS letter - advice about studing this course - give detail of your course took at university - explain why you recommand this university - give some advice about how to apply

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