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• use a greeting to start and a polite ending - to help the reader, you can use separate paragraphs for some of the separate points in the instructions. • writethecorrectnumberofwords(60-80). • write about all parts in the instructions - DO NOT add anything extra. • check your writing for mistakes - think about how you use can/ can't/ could I couldn't.

• use a greeting to start and a polite ending - to help the reader, you can use separate paragraphs for some of the separate points in the instructions. • writethecorrectnumberofwords(60-80). • write about all parts in the instructions - DO NOT add anything extra. • check your writing for mistakes - think about how you use can/ can't/ could I couldn't. b3BeW
Dear Simon, I’m really interested in learning to be a digital designer. I think my skills and abilities is perfectly match with this job. I’m studying computer science in university so I can do almost IT skills. Especially, I could draw beautiful pictures and had good a design mindset when I was younger. Although I couldn’t work long hours and didn’t have much experiences on digital design, but I think I can challenge myself and improve it. Thanks, PhiDear Simon, I’m really interested in learning to be a digital designer. I think my skills and abilities is perfectly match with this job. I’m studying computer science in university so I can do almost IT skills. Especially, I could draw beautiful pictures and had good a design mindset when I was younger. Although I couldn’t work long hours and didn’t have much experiences on digital design, but I think I can challenge myself and improve it. Thanks, Phi
Dear Simon,

I’m
really
interested in learning to be a digital designer. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
and abilities is
perfectly
Consider using a past participle here: "matched".
match
with this job.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m studying computer science in university
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can do almost IT
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
.
Especially
, I could draw
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
pictures and had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
design
mindset when I was younger.

Although I couldn’t work long hours and didn’t have
Use "many" with countable nouns.
much
experiences on digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
design
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
I can challenge myself and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
it.

Thanks,

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PhiDear
Simon,

I’m
really
interested in learning to be a digital designer. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
and abilities is
perfectly
Consider using a past participle here: "matched".
match
with this job.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m studying computer science in university
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can do almost IT
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
.
Especially
, I could draw
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
pictures and had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
design
mindset when I was younger.

Although I couldn’t work long hours and didn’t have
Use "many" with countable nouns.
much
experiences on digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
design
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
I can challenge myself and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
it.

Thanks,

Phi
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IELTS letter • use a greeting to start and a polite ending - to help the reader, you can use separate paragraphs for some of the separate points in the instructions. • writethecorrectnumberofwords(60-80). • write about all parts in the instructions - DO NOT add anything extra. • check your writing for mistakes - think about how you use can/ can't/ could I couldn't.

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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