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Write a letter to express your support for the man and suggest two possible courses of actions

Write a letter to express your support for the man and suggest two possible courses of actions 8GVnr
Dear Dog Woe, You're right to be concerned about how to deal with the dog's incontinence. I received as well as read your letter and comprehended it; I am writing this letter to give you a piece of advice. Firstly, I fully support you against leaving your dog outdoors day and night with no shelter, especially in this cold winter. Not only does it lose energy and get tired but also have some latent diseases caused by bacteria such as flu, fever. . . There are some ideas, which I think will be appropriate for you. The first way you can find an opportunity and talk to him about the disadvantages of being left outside as above. Then, making a suggestion is to buy a dog house equipped with a fireplace to keep it warmer. The other one is to persuade the friend to take the dog to the vet for treatment. According to my point, the second way is the best in this case as it can be completely cured despite the high cost, but we are not anxious about it too. I hope that this advice helps, and let's expect that things get better. If you have any problem, don't hesitate to contact me by telephone on 381 772. Best wishes, Phung Thi Dong.
Dear
Dog
Woe,

You're right to
be concerned
about how to deal with the dog's incontinence. I received
as well
as read your letter and comprehended it; I am writing this letter to give you a piece of advice.

Firstly
, I
fully
support you against leaving your
dog
outdoors day and night with no shelter,
especially
in this
cold
winter. Not
only
does it lose energy and
get
tired
but
also
have
some
latent diseases caused by bacteria such as flu, fever.
.
.


There are
some
ideas
, which I
think
will be appropriate for you. The
first
way you can find an opportunity and talk to him about the disadvantages of being
left
outside as above. Then, making a suggestion is to
buy
a
dog
house
equipped with a fireplace to
keep
it warmer. The other one is to persuade the friend to take the
dog
to the vet for treatment. According to my point, the second way is the best
in this case
as it can be completely cured despite the high cost,
but
we are not anxious about it too.

I hope that this advice
helps
, and
let
's
expect
that things
get
better. If you have any problem, don't hesitate to contact me by telephone on 381 772.

Best wishes,
Phung
Thi
Dong.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to express your support for the man and suggest two possible courses of actions

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
216 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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