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You are moving to a new country to join a new company. One of family members is moving with you too and is willing to work with your company too . Write a letter to your manager.

You are moving to a new country to join a new company. One of family members is moving with you too and is willing to work with your company too. Write a letter to your manager. QK3Gw
Dear Mr. Smith, I am Nilam Patel, and I have been working in your company for one year. I am working in the IT department. I heard that you recruiting more new employees in the IT department. I am penning this letter to request you to consider my brother Nirav Patel for this post. I presently move from INDIA to work in this company nest month. My mother and my brother moving with me, as there are only three persons in my family. My brother has completed his MCA ( Master in computer applications). During his course, he did work in the IT department of Reliance company. I think he will be perfectly suited for this post. I am attaching his CV(curriculum vitae), along with this letter. I hope, you think about this proposal. In anticipation of your positive response. Yours faithfully, Nilam Patel.
Dear Mr. Smith, I am
Nilam
Patel, and I have been working in your
company
for one year. I am working in the IT department. I heard that
you recruiting
more new employees in the IT department.
I
am penning this letter to request you to consider my brother
Nirav
Patel for this post.
I
presently
move
from INDIA to work in this
company
nest month. My mother and my brother moving with me, as there are
only
three persons in my family. My brother has completed his MCA
(
Master in computer applications). During his course, he did work in the IT department of Reliance
company
. I
think
he will be
perfectly
suited for this post. I am attaching his CV(curriculum vitae), along with this letter.
I
hope, you
think
about this proposal. In anticipation of your
positive
response. Yours
faithfully
,
Nilam
Patel.
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IELTS letter You are moving to a new country to join a new company. One of family members is moving with you too and is willing to work with your company too. Write a letter to your manager.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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