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You are moving to a new country to join a new company. One of family members is moving with you too and is willing to work with your company too . Write a letter to your manager.

You are moving to a new country to join a new company. One of family members is moving with you too and is willing to work with your company too. Write a letter to your manager. QK3Gw

Dear Mr. Smith, I am Nilam Patel, and I have been working in your company for one year. I am working in the IT department. I heard that you recruiting more new employees in the IT department. I am penning this letter to request you to consider my brother Nirav Patel for this post. I presently move from INDIA to work in this company nest month. My mother and my brother moving with me, as there are only three persons in my family. My brother has completed his MCA ( Master in computer applications). During his course, he did work in the IT department of Reliance company. I think he will be perfectly suited for this post. I am attaching his CV(curriculum vitae), along with this letter. I hope, you think about this proposal. In anticipation of your positive response. Yours faithfully, Nilam Patel.

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Nilam
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company
 for one year. I am working in the IT department. I heard that Did you mean "you're recruiting", "you are recruiting", or "you were recruiting"?you're recruitingyou are recruitingyou were recruiting
you recruiting
 more new employees in the IT department. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Nirav
 Patel for this post. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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presently
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move
 from INDIA to work in this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 nest month. My mother and my brother moving with me, as there are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 three persons in my family. My brother has completed his MCA Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
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company
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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 suited for this post. I am attaching his CV(curriculum vitae), along with this letter. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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think
 about this proposal. In anticipation of your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response. Yours faithfully
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 Patel. 