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an application letter for a summer job

an application letter for a summer job xxn7g

I'd like to work for first time, in this summer holidays. could you help me for find the best job. I need to income. I'm the best soccer player at my school. I can play soccer well. and I can run fast. but I can't go swimming, because when I was child, my aunt fell into the sea and we didn't manage to pull her out. I'm hating of swimming pool and beach. however, I want to be on ground. I'd love to teaching people and spend time outside. you know a good work. Could you tell me

I'd like to work for first
 time, in this summer holidays. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCould
could
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me for find the best job. I need to income.

I'm the best soccer player at my school.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can play soccer well. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 I can run This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 I can't go swimming, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 when I was child, my aunt fell into the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).sea, and
sea and
 we didn't manage to pull her out. I'The verb 'hating' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
m hating
 of swimming pool and beach. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHowever
however
, I want to be on ground.

I'd This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to teaching This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and spend time outside. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYou
you
 know a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 work. Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
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