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You want to take a part in support in other country

You want to take a part in support in other country 95jnx
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter regarding participation in hockey competition. I came to know about this support competition from my college website. As I know that this competition is going to be held on 22th august. I want to take a part in this support competition. I played national level hockey and I got gold medal in that as I am lover of supports. Please let me know what kind of documents you need and where is these supports are going to be held? I look forward to your reply. ThanksYour sincerelyBani
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter regarding participation in hockey
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competition
. I came to know about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
support
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competition
from my college website.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I know that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competition
is going to
be held
on
Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.
22th
august. I want to take a part in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
support
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competition
. I played national level hockey and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
gold medal in that as I am lover of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
supports
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know what kind of documents you need and where is these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
supports
are going to
be held
? I look forward to your reply.
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ThanksYour
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sincerelyBani
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IELTS letter You want to take a part in support in other country

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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