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write an apology letter to your friend. it sould explain:- 1. what has haapend 2. how it happened 3. how you are going to fix the issue

write an apology letter to your friend. it sould explain: - 1. what has haapend 2. how it happened 3. how you are going to fix the issue yPOJP
Dear Alice, I know that’s it’s been too late to respond to you, at last I have decided to put my pen to paper today. First of all, I am extremely sorry to notify you that a crack has developed on your magic cup. It happened two weeks back while I was doing an experiment and it accidently fell on the floor. I remember that the magic cup was of great importance to you as it was passed down by your late grandfather. I thought that the cup has been permanently damaged but I did a few researches about the best glues available online. And recently, I discovered a glue that would be perfect to solve the current issue. I have placed an order for it in amazon and it would reach me by the end of this month. Even though it is costly, it works perfect. Once again, I am sorry for the damage caused. Best wishes Andrew
Dear Alice,

I know
Did you mean "that it is" or "that is its"?
that’s it’s
been too late to respond to you, at last I have decided to put my pen to paper
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I am
extremely
sorry to notify you that a crack has developed on your magic cup.

It happened two weeks back while I was doing an experiment and it
Possible spelling mistake found.
accidently
fell on the floor. I remember that the magic cup was of great importance to you as it
was passed
down by your late grandfather.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that the cup has been
permanently
damaged
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I did a few researches about the best glues available online. And recently, I discovered a glue that would be perfect to solve the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
issue. I have placed an order for it
The usual collocation for "amazon" is "on". Did you mean "on amazon"?
in amazon
and it would reach me by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this month.
Even though
it is costly, it works perfect.

Once again, I am sorry for the damage caused.

Best wishes

Andrew
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IELTS letter write an apology letter to your friend. it sould explain: - 1. what has haapend 2. how it happened 3. how you are going to fix the issue

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  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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