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In my informal letter about dear Lusy

In my informal letter about dear Lusy k6MKO
Dear LusyI do hope this letter will find you in good health and spirits. I'll try to answer your questions. No doubt computers and Nets save made ourlives difficult and more exciting. We are going a project at school on how comat school on how computers are changing pupils lives. Please could you tell me how Nets and compuyers are changing things what pupils think of them? Just give me a call if you have any questhions left.
Dear
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LusyI
do hope this letter will find you in
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good
health and spirits. I'll try to answer your questions. No doubt computers and Nets save made
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ourlives
difficult and more exciting. We are going a project at school on how
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comat
school on how computers are changing pupils
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lives
.
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Please
could you
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tell
me how Nets and
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compuyers
are changing things what pupils
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think
of them?
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Just
give me a call if you have any
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questhions
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left
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IELTS letter In my informal letter about dear Lusy

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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