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A wedding invitation for a friend

A wedding invitation for a friend QV6qy
Hi Tom, I hope this email finds you well! It’s been a long time since the last time we met in Canada. Today, I’d like to share the good news with you: I’m going to get married! My wife and I sincerely invite you to our wedding, held on July 7, 2021. To get started, I want to give you a brief introduction to the schedule of the wedding. As I mentioned, the wedding is held on July 7, 2021, which means next month. So I guess you still have plenty of time to be prepared. We will have a party in a bar with our close friends on the day before our wedding. On our big day, we will gather our families and friends in the hotel garden at 2 pm, take photos together, and play games. Later at 5 pm, we will have dinner and celebrate the wedding in the hotel. You’re my best friend at the university. I still remember we spent lots of time being together. You’re always supportive and generous. Also, we haven’t seen each other for years. I hope you can be here with me, sharing the happiness. I look forward to hearing from you. Please stay safe and take care. Best regards, Nic
Hi Tom,

I hope this email finds you well! It’s been a long
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time
since the last
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we met in Canada.
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Today
, I’d like to share the
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good
news with you: I’m going to
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get
married! My wife and I
sincerely
invite you to our
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wedding
, held on July 7, 2021.

To
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get
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started
, I want to give you a brief introduction to the schedule of the
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wedding
. As I mentioned, the
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wedding
is held
on July 7, 2021, which means
next
month.
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I guess you
still
have
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plenty
of
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to
be prepared
. We will have a party in a bar with our close friends on the day
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before
our
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wedding
. On our
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big
day, we will gather our families and friends in the hotel garden at 2 pm, take photos together, and play games. Later at 5 pm, we will have dinner and celebrate the
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wedding
in the hotel.

You’re my best friend at the university. I
still
remember we spent lots of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
being together. You’re always supportive and generous.
Also
, we haven’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
each other for years. I hope you can be here with me, sharing the happiness.

I look forward to hearing from you.
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Please
stay safe and take care.

Best regards,

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Nic
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IELTS letter A wedding invitation for a friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
209 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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