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Application as an Office Assistant

Application as an Office Assistant 7JyM2
Dear Recruiting Team, Trust this email finds you well. I am writing to you to express my deep interest in applying for the position of Office Assistant posted in your company website. My name is Christian Arcilla, 42, Filipino national and currently working and residing in Dubai, United Arab Emirates. I have over 20 years of working experience in the field of Finance and Accountancy whereas more than 10 years was working here in Dubai. My extensive experience and knowledge in this profession as well as eagerness to live and work in Canada with my family gives me courage to apply to this position. As I’ve read in the post it assists the Office Manager in administering expenses, inventory wherein I can apply my Accounting knowledge therefore trusting that your company could give consideration to foreign applicant like me. Additionally, for your further information, I’ve recently applied as an immigrant in Canada and the process is currently on-going. However, in order to increase the points and achieve the required score as well as to ensure the success of our application I am searching for a company who can offer a job and would accept to hire an overseas applicant. To further acquaint you with my capabilities, I am well versed as well in any ERP such as Oracle, SAP, systems. Furthermore, I have a wide knowledge and experience in logistics or procurement process and transaction. As well as proficient in using Excel formula and MS office and ability to do multi task, able to work independently and a quick learner. To further acquaint you with the specific of my background I am enclosing my resume here for your reference. I look forward to hearing from you and hoping on your favorable consideration to my application.
Dear Recruiting Team,

Trust this email finds you well.

I am writing to you to express my deep interest in applying for the position of Office Assistant posted in your
company
website.

My name is Christian
Arcilla
, 42, Filipino national and
currently
working and residing in Dubai, United Arab Emirates. I have over 20 years of working experience in the field of Finance and Accountancy whereas more than 10 years was working here in Dubai. My extensive experience and knowledge in this profession as
well
as eagerness to
live
and work in Canada with my family gives me courage to apply to this position. As I’ve read in the post it assists the Office Manager in administering expenses, inventory wherein I can apply my Accounting knowledge
therefore
trusting that your
company
could give consideration to foreign applicant like me.
Additionally
, for your
further
information, I’ve recently applied as an immigrant in Canada and the process is
currently
on-going
.
However
, in order to increase the points and achieve the required score as
well
as to ensure the success of our application I am searching for a
company
who can offer a job and would accept to hire an overseas applicant.

To
further
acquaint you with my capabilities, I am
well
versed as
well
in any ERP such as Oracle, SAP, systems.
Furthermore
, I have a wide knowledge and experience in logistics or procurement process and transaction. As
well
as proficient in using Excel formula and MS office and ability to do multi task, able to work
independently
and a quick learner.

To
further
acquaint you with the specific of my background I am enclosing my resume here for your reference.

I look forward to hearing from you and hoping on your favorable consideration to my application.
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IELTS letter Application as an Office Assistant

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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