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You have recently started attending hobby classes in your city. Your mother in your hometown wants to know about it. Write a letter to your mother. In the letter, mention: What class are you taking? How do you like it? How long will you take the classes?

You have recently started attending hobby classes in your city. Your mother in your hometown wants to know about it. Write a letter to your mother. In the letter, mention: What class are you taking? How do you like it? How long will you take the classes? 1ayYX
Dearest Mom, I am thrilled to write this letter to tell you about taking up guitar classes in my city which has been my hobby since long time. As you're aware, i am so passionate about learning guitar. Since childhood, it was my dream to play the guitar, however, was not able to fulfill it as there were no classes available in our hometown. After getting admission in college in Pune, i had plethora of options to learn musical instruments and I was so excited that guitar classes were available. Ihave joined Reva classes. On 1st May 2021, which was my first day, our instructor taught us the way to handle the guitar to 10 students batch. I was mesmerized by the way he was playing it smoothly. I am sure this class will really help me to learn the basics and later the advanced level. The class duration is for 2 months everyday for an hour starting 6 pm to 7 pm. Furthermore, this time is perfect for me as my lectures are till 3 pm which allows me to take some rest and get refreshed before the classes. I will surely tell you more once i am back in the hometown. Your beloved Tom
Dearest Mom,

I
am thrilled
to write this letter to
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tell
you about taking up guitar
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classes
in my city which has been my hobby since long time. As you're aware,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am
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so
passionate about learning guitar.

Since childhood, it was my dream to play the guitar,
however
, was not able to fulfill it as there were no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
available in our hometown. After getting admission in college in Pune,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
had plethora of options to learn musical
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
instruments and
I was
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so
excited that guitar
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
were available.
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Ihave
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joined
Reva classes.

On 1st May 2021, which was my
first
day, our instructor taught us the way to handle the guitar to 10 students batch. I
was mesmerized
by the way he was playing it
smoothly
. I am sure this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
will
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to learn the basics and later the advanced level.

The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
duration is for 2 months
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
for an hour starting 6 pm to 7 pm.
Furthermore
, this time is perfect for me as my lectures are till 3 pm which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
me to take
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some
rest and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
refreshed
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before
the classes.

I will
surely
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tell
you more once
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am back in the hometown.

Your beloved

Tom
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IELTS letter You have recently started attending hobby classes in your city. Your mother in your hometown wants to know about it. Write a letter to your mother. In the letter, mention: What class are you taking? How do you like it? How long will you take the classes?

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