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You want to read a book that you can’t find in the bookstores in your area. Write a letter to the manager of a bookstore in another city asking if they have a copy of the book. In your letter you should: describe the book explain why you need the book and how you would pay for it You can spend 20 minutes on this task. You must write at least 150 words

You want to read a book that you can’t find in the bookstores in your area. Write a letter to the manager of a bookstore in another city asking if they have a copy of the book. In your letter you should: describe the book explain why you need the book and how you would pay for it You can spend 20 minutes on this task. You must aRGd
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding the book ‘Northern Lights’ which I couldn’t find in any of the bookstores in my locality. Written by Philip Pullman it was first published some 12 years ago. Since then over 15 million copies of the book have been sold. ‘Northern Lights’ is a story which revolves around the struggles of a boy and a girl. It was recently declared the winner of Carnegie Medal for the finest book for children published in the last 70 years. I am an avid reader of all kinds of books. I particularly like those books written for children. Needless to say, I am very keen on reading this book. Unfortunately, none of the bookstores in my city have a copy of ‘Northern Lights’ with them. In case you have a copy of this book, I request you to kindly send it to my postal address. I will make the payment on delivery. Hoping to hear back from you soon, Kind Regards Manjusha
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you regarding the
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book
‘Northern Lights’ which I couldn’t find in any of the bookstores in my locality. Written by Philip Pullman it was
first
published
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12 years ago.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
then over 15 million copies of the
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book
have
been sold
.

‘Northern Lights’ is a story which revolves around the struggles of a boy and a girl. It was recently declared the winner of Carnegie Medal for the finest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
for children published in the last 70 years. I am an avid reader of all kinds of
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books
. I
particularly
like those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
written for children. Needless to say, I am
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very
keen on reading this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. Unfortunately, none of the bookstores in my city have a copy of ‘Northern Lights’ with them. In case you have a copy of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
, I request you to kindly
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send
it to my postal address. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the payment on delivery.

Hoping to hear back from you
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soon
,

Kind Regards

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Manjusha

IELTS letter You want to read a book that you can’t find in the bookstores in your area. Write a letter to the manager of a bookstore in another city asking if they have a copy of the book. In your letter you should: describe the book explain why you need the book and how you would pay for it You can spend 20 minutes on this task. You must

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5 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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