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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job lKlo
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter of inquire about the job in City Museum. My name is Amanpreet Kaur. I have seen about this advertisement in an English ‘The Tribune’ newspaper on 25th March. I have personal skills to meet the requirements of this position. I have a practical experience for this job. In 2020, I worked in Jalandhar city museum as a position of Supervisor. I have a one-year experience to deal with every situation. I already performed all the duties which are required for this job. I have attracted my resume with this letter I am keen of listening different sorts of music. I think to work in city museum is very interesting. Honestly, I personally feel that I am qualified for this job position. Because I have experience and knowledge. I hope, I will be suitable for this job. I will be waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully Amanpreet kaur
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter of inquire about the
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job
in City Museum. My name is
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Amanpreet
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Kaur
. I have
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seen
about this advertisement in an English ‘The Tribune’ newspaper on 25th March. I have personal
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skills
to
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meet
the requirements of this position.

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I
have a practical experience for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
. In 2020, I worked in Jalandhar city museum as a position of Supervisor. I have a one-year experience to deal with every situation. I already performed all the duties which
are required
for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have attracted my resume with this letter

I am keen of listening
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different
sorts of music.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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think
to work in city museum is
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very
interesting.
Honestly
, I
personally
feel that I
am qualified
for this
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job
position.
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Because
I have experience and knowledge. I hope, I will be suitable for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
. I will be waiting for your reply.

Yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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  American English
5 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job