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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do aRjd
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to inform you that my phone was stolen during my last trip to France. Eventhought, my Nokia S99 phone is classified as an old one, it can still be considered as one of the best in its category. As a fact, there is many people searching the market in order to buy a smilare device. During my stay at the Hilton hotel in Paris, the housekeeper was cleaning my room while i was taking a shower, and since that, my mobile device is missing. I am pretty sure that it was taken by here, but she refuse to admit the crime. base on my travel insurance coverage, I am requesting you to send me a banck check covering the phone price as soon as possible or you can buy a new device similare to the stolen one. I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, Samer Zacca
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to inform you that my phone
was stolen
during my last trip to France.

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Eventhought
, my Nokia S99 phone
is classified
as an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
one, it can
still
be considered
as one of the best in its category. As a fact, there is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
searching the market in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a
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smilare
device.

During my stay at the Hilton hotel in Paris, the housekeeper was cleaning my room while
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was taking a shower, and since that, my mobile device is missing. I am pretty sure that it
was taken
by here,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
she refuse to admit the crime.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
base
on my travel insurance coverage, I am requesting you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me a
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banck
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
covering the phone price as
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soon
as possible or you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a new device
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similare
to the stolen one.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards,

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Samer
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Zacca

IELTS letter On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

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  American English
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154 words
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