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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer b1BP

Dear Joe, I hope this letter will find you well. I am writing this letter to provide you my advice regarding whether you should go for camping holidays or not. I would say these sorts of holidays will bring you close to the nature as you have to visit the mountains. Moreover, this would be give you a opportunity to spend some time with your family. However, I would say there are some drawbacks of camping. Firstly, I believe you have to travel a lot. In addition to that you have to spend more money on different types of instruments of camping. As far my concern to join you in this adventurous activity, I am very busy in my office work, but I would try to convince my supervisor for a leave. I hope this letter will help you to make decision. Regards, Jaspal

Dear Joe,

I hope this letter will find you well. I am writing this letter to provide you my advice regarding whether you should go for camping holidays or not. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would say these sorts of holidays will bring you close to the nature as you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 visit the mountains. Moreover
, this would be give you Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 opportunity to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time with your family.

However
, I would say there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drawbacks of camping. Firstly
, I believe you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 travel a lot. In addition
 to that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 spend more money on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 types of instruments of camping.

As far my concern to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you in this adventurous activity, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy in my office work, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I would try to convince my supervisor for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
.

I hope this letter will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 decision.

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