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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do oglX
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my smart phone while on holiday in France last week. The phone is an IPhone S99 smart phone and cost $2000 when I purchase it one month ago, with a 150 gigabytes memory, 250 megapixels camera, and a black leather cover with my name on it. I lost it when I was eating lunch at a restaurant facing the Hilton hotel in the boulevard street in Paris. I believe that the restaurant is called Good Mood. I had been there for around 50 minutes when I notice is was missing. I would like you to guide me with the process to make a claim for the value of the above mentioned item and request to send me the needed information and documents by email in order to proceed. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Kind regards Samer Zacca
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my smart phone while on holiday in France last week.

The phone is an
IPhone
S99 smart phone and cost $2000 when I
purchase
it one month ago, with a 150 gigabytes memory, 250 megapixels camera, and a black leather cover with my name on it.

I lost it when I was eating lunch at a restaurant facing the Hilton hotel in the boulevard street in Paris. I believe that the restaurant
is called
Good
Mood.
I
had been there for around 50 minutes when I notice
is
was missing.

I
would like you to guide me with the process to
make
a claim for the value of the above mentioned item and request to
send
me the needed information and documents by email in order to proceed.

I
look forward to hearing from you as
soon
as possible.

Kind regards

Samer
Zacca
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IELTS letter On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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