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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. Write at least 150 words.

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. 8npx
Dear Mr. Walker I am writing this letter of inquire that I want to apply for the post of quality Assurance. I have seen about this post on the university notice board on Saturday, 5th November. I have personal skills to meet the requirements of this position. I have done sales management course in 2019 Now i am currently enrolled in business Administration course in Loren Brusaue university. I have theoretical and practical knowledge of this post. In 2020, I worked with P&D company as a position of Quality Assurance Manager. So, I have a one year experience to deal with every situation. I already performed all the duties which are required for this job. I have attracted my resume with this letter Honestly, I personally feel that I am qualify for this job position. Because I have experience and knowledge. I hope, I will be suitable for this job. I will be waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully Amanpreet kaur
Dear Mr. Walker

I am writing this letter of inquire that I want to apply for the post of quality Assurance. I have
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seen
about this post on the university notice board on
Did you mean to refer to the current year? 5th November 2021 is not a Saturday, but a Friday.
Saturday, 5th November
. I have personal
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skills
to
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meet
the requirements of this position.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have done sales management course in 2019
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Now
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am
currently
enrolled in business Administration course in Loren
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Brusaue
university.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have theoretical and practical knowledge of this post.

In 2020, I worked with
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P&D
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company
as a position of Quality Assurance Manager.
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So
, I have a
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "one-year"
one year
experience to deal with every situation. I already performed all the duties which
are required
for this job. I have attracted my resume with this letter

Honestly
, I
personally
feel that I am qualify for this job position.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
I have experience and knowledge. I hope, I will be suitable for this job. I will be waiting for your reply.

Yours
faithfully


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Amanpreet
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kaur
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IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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