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You want to learn a language.There is a teacher nearby where you live

You want to learn a language. There is a teacher nearby where you live aEEKY
Dear Madam, I am writing to show my willingness to learn spoken English. While searching for a good English teacher, I saw your advertisement in a local newspaper dated on 02/02/18. You are highly qualified and have a rich experience in the same field. Thereafter, I asked about you from one of my friends. He really praised you and your teaching methodology and motivated me to join your coaching classes. I have recently joined a new marketing company. As a customer relationship executive, I have to deal with different types of customers. Some of them interact in regional language, whereas others prefer English. In that case, I feel nervous while dealing with the customers who speak in English. I would like to ask about the fees, date of joining, and the timings of the classes. I would be highly obliged, if you could spare some time to teach me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. Yours Faithfully Sachin
Dear Madam,

I am writing to
show
my willingness to learn spoken English. While searching for a
good
English teacher, I
saw
your advertisement in a local newspaper dated on 02/02/18. You are
highly
qualified and have a rich experience in the same field.

Thereafter, I asked about you from one of my friends. He
really
praised you and your teaching methodology and motivated me to
join
your coaching classes.

I have recently
joined
a new marketing
company
. As a customer relationship executive, I
have to
deal with
different
types of customers.
Some
of them interact in regional language, whereas others prefer English.
In that case
, I feel nervous while dealing with the customers who speak in English.

I would like to ask about the fees, date of joining, and the timings of the classes. I would be
highly
obliged, if you could spare
some
time to teach me.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thank you in advance for your time and consideration.

Yours
Faithfully


Sachin
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IELTS letter You want to learn a language. There is a teacher nearby where you live

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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