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Giving advise letter for giving recommendation

Giving advise letter for giving recommendation Ogged
Dear Ann First of all, Thank you for your letter, I am writing in reply to your letter for advice about resolving problem how to organise your time to attend C1 certifacation course for getting bonuse salary at school. Your first problem is about your time managemant skill, if you can spend your time correctly, Simultaneously, you will be able to do all the works, studying, and looking after your children. I strongly recommend that you will stop taking part in offline course where is hold on Educational Centre, Because of You are a family woman and also You must take care of your young children in these days, so that If you do want to get C1 certifacition after few month, You should apply for online course which is studied on Telegram chanels. In this case, If I were you, I would choose this type of studying according to thinking my family and my career. Indeed, It is not impossible to getting knowledge such as situation, Just If you join Online lesson group, you must be strictly by yourself and futhermore, working on yourself much more than you are requested by teachers in the courses. In with this learning, the women not only can manage houseworks on time, but also they would not miss lessons which can not participated in online lesson by chance. So that It is very comfortable for women as you who is so busy with bussiness of life and family. In addition to, I would suggest that you ought to recruit a babysitting for your children for being ready for your CEFR exam. In view of fact, Looking after the child request us to spend amount of time with them. Instead of doing these, My dear Ann must prepare for important examination for your bright future, You do not worry from my like this recommendation, it does not mean that You would be unattentive for your members of family or children, It just help you to learn by heart and be ready well knowledgeble as you desired for exam. I trust you will recieve this advice for you and I hope that these recommendations will be great help solving your time management problem. Please let me be aware of what decision You receivedYour sincerely Janny
Dear Ann
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, Thank you for your letter, I am writing in reply to your letter for advice about resolving problem how to
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organise
your
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time
to attend C1
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certifacation
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course
for getting
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bonuse
salary at school. Your
first
problem is about your
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time
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managemant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
, if you can spend your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
correctly
,
Simultaneously
, you will be able to do all the works, studying, and looking after your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
. I
strongly
recommend that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
taking part in offline
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
where is hold on Educational
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Centre
,
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Because
of You are a
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family
woman and
also
You
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must
take care of your young
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children
in these days,
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so
that If you do want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
C1
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certifacition
after
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few month
, You should apply for online
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course
which
is studied
on Telegram
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chanels
.
In this case
, If I were you, I would choose this type of studying according to thinking my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
and my career.
Indeed
, It is not impossible to
Did you mean "get"?
getting
knowledge such as situation,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
If you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
Online lesson group, you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
strictly
by yourself and
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futhermore
, working on yourself much more than you
are requested
by teachers in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
. In with this learning, the women not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
can manage
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houseworks on
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time
,
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but
also
they would not miss lessons which can not participated in online lesson by chance.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that It is
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very
comfortable for women as you who is
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so
busy with
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bussiness
of life and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
.
In addition
to, I would suggest that you ought to recruit a babysitting for your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
for being ready for your CEFR exam. In view of fact, Looking after the child request us to spend amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
with them.
Instead
of doing these, My dear Ann
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
prepare for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
examination for your bright future, You do not worry from my like this recommendation, it does not mean that You would be
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unattentive
for your members of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
, It
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
Did you mean "helps"?
help
you to learn by heart and be ready well
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knowledgeble
as you desired for exam. I trust you will
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recieve
this advice for you and I hope that these recommendations will be great
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help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to solve" or "solve".
solving
your
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time
management problem.
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Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me be aware of what decision You
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receivedYour
sincerely
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Janny
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IELTS letter Giving advise letter for giving recommendation

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
379 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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