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a letter of apologise for missing a friend's party

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Dear Josephine I am writing to you to apologize for not attending to your birthday party. However, I was looking forward to coming and seeing how happy you would feel yourself in the friendly atmosphere with the group of your siblings and nearest people having a fun and wishing sincerely stuffs to you. Unfortunately I had to take part in the urgent meeting on business on that day even though it was late. You know, my boss is extremely strict besides he will not listen anybody in that case. Particularly in the times the company came across some difficulties. I am hopefully convinced that it was a great party and my absence could not affect your brilliant mood. If yes, please accept my excuse. I am deeply sorry that I should find an alternative way with my duty at work. It is said to be better ever than never. I am embarrassingly mean I had bought a special present for your birthday far earliest before the day. I am absolutely sure you will love it. Unless do you have any jobs in the evening, would you invite me to your house? Give me a chance to correct my blame. Love Jonny
Dear Josephine

I am writing to you to apologize for not attending to your birthday party.
However
, I was looking forward to coming and seeing how happy you would feel yourself in the friendly atmosphere with the group of your siblings and nearest
people
having a fun and wishing
sincerely
stuffs to you.

Unfortunately I had to
take part
in the urgent meeting on business on that day
even though
it was late. You know, my boss is
extremely
strict
besides
he will not listen anybody
in that case
.
Particularly
in the times the
company
came across
some
difficulties.

I am
hopefully
convinced that it was a great party and my absence could not affect your brilliant mood. If yes,
please
accept my excuse. I am
deeply
sorry that I should find an alternative way with my duty at work.

It
is said
to be better ever than
never
. I am
embarrassingly
mean I had
bought
a special present for your birthday far earliest
before
the day. I am
absolutely
sure you will
love
it.

Unless do you have any jobs in the evening, would you invite me to your
house
? Give me a chance to correct my blame.

Love
Jonny
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IELTS letter a letter of apologise for missing a friend's party

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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