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You have received an email from Edward, who wants to find piano courses. "I am interested in both a 2-month course and your private lessons. I have some experience playing the piano. Could you send me some information about prices of the piano courses? Could you suggest some other music courses? I want to learn to play musical instruments after work. Can you give me some advice about whether I should take private lessons or learn with a large group?" Write a letter responding to Edward (about 120 words).

You have received an email from Edward, who wants to find piano courses. "I am interested in both a 2-month course and your private lessons. I have some experience playing the piano. Could you send me some information about prices of the piano courses? Could you suggest some other music courses? I want to learn to play musical instruments after work. Can you give me some advice about whether I should take private lessons or learn with a large group? " Write a letter responding to Edward (about 120 words). 7rrd3

Dear Edward, How have you been? I am writing this email to answering your wonder about the piano course. You said that you have some experience in playing piano, I think that is one of your advantage. In this course, the cost is quite reasonable with just $300 and if you register early, you may get 10% discount. In our academy, we also have violin and guitar courses at 6 p. m in every evening. That is suitable for you to join in these course after work. In my opinion, you should take a large group lesson. The number of students for each group is fom 7- 10 so it is not really crowded. I am looking forward to your reply soon. Best wishes,

Dear Edward,

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