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You are going to study a short term course at a university in newzeland. Write a letter to the accommodation officer of the University. In your letter introduce yourself. Describe the type of accommodation you want. Inform the length of your stay and ask for the cost of accommodation.

You are going to study a short term course at a university in newzeland. Write a letter to the accommodation officer of the University. In your letter introduce yourself. Describe the type of accommodation you want. Inform the length of your stay and ask for the cost of accommodation. 111ln
Dear sir, My name is ammu, I live in India. I am writing this letter to enquire about the accommodation facilities at the university of Newzealand. I have completed my territory education, and now I am pursuing a short term business management program at your University. First of all, although, I would like to live in a university youth hostel, I don't want to share my room with strangers. Moreover, in this program, I might prepare many projects, as a consequence, I need a single room with an attached bathroom. Besides, I except kitchen with the stove, so I have a plan to cook food. In addition, the duration of the course is six months, nevertheless, I have a plan to come earlier. Therefore, I need the lodging for seven months. Furthermore, let me inform the full expense of the accommodation. Looking forward to the needful. Yours faithfullyAmmu
Dear sir,

My name is
ammu
, I
live
in India. I am writing this letter to
enquire
about the accommodation facilities at the university of
Newzealand
. I have completed my territory education, and
now
I am pursuing a short term business management program at your University.

First of all
, although, I would like to
live
in a university youth hostel, I don't want to share my room with strangers.
Moreover
, in this program, I might prepare
many
projects, as a consequence, I need a single room with an attached bathroom.
Besides
, I except kitchen with the stove,
so
I have a plan to cook food.

In addition
, the duration of the course is six months,
nevertheless
, I have a plan to
come
earlier.
Therefore
, I need the lodging for seven months.
Furthermore
,
let
me inform the full expense of the accommodation.

Looking forward to the needful.

Yours
faithfullyAmmu
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IELTS letter You are going to study a short term course at a university in newzeland. Write a letter to the accommodation officer of the University. In your letter introduce yourself. Describe the type of accommodation you want. Inform the length of your stay and ask for the cost of accommodation.

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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