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. Sue is applying for a volunteer position in your student support program. She wants to know.

. Sue is applying for a volunteer position in your student support program. She wants to know. eRRnV
Dear Edward, I am very pleasure to receive your letter. From your application, I think you are very suitable for this volunteer position in our student support program. In this program, there are many type of support we expected to provide such as 50% scholarship, full scholarship or discount dorm fee for students. We will provide them depend on their exam result and their achievement in other activities. We do not have any specific requirement but you need to be enthusiastic person. You should try your best to complete your missions. During the program, we can encourage students to stay in school and give them motivation to complete a bachelor's degree. Besides, you can meet many people who have experience in society activities. They can give you some tips and skills will helps you a lot in your life. Moreover, you also receive certificate after the program. Hope to see you in program soon. Best wishes,
Dear Edward,

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pleasure to receive your letter. From your application, I
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think
you are
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suitable for this volunteer position in our student support
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program
. In this
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, there are
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many type
of support we
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to provide such as 50% scholarship, full scholarship or discount dorm fee for students. We will provide them depend on their exam result and their achievement in other activities. We do not have any specific requirement
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but
you need to be enthusiastic person. You should try your best to complete your missions. During the
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program
, we can encourage students to stay in school and give them motivation to complete a bachelor's degree.
Besides
, you can
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meet
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many
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people
who have experience in society activities. They can give you
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some
tips and
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skills
will
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helps
you a lot in your life.
Moreover
, you
also
receive certificate after the program.

Hope to
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see
you in
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program
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soon
.

Best wishes,

IELTS letter . Sue is applying for a volunteer position in your student support program. She wants to know.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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