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You want to learn a language.There is a teacher near to where you give. Write a letter to the teacher.In your letter say how you came to know about him.explain why you want to learn.aks What help they can offer you.

You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you give. Write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say how you came to know about him. explain why you want to learn. aks What help they can offer you. PrKaK
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inquire about learning English language from you. I work in our local newspaper as a reporter. I came across an advetisement "English club for advanced levels". I find that you are the person I am looking for. I am absolutely keen to study from native speakers like yourself. At this reason, I want you to enroll me to your high grade course. One of my reason learning English language is that next year I am going to New York city on my business. However, it demands me on awaring of language. Obviously, English is an international language, although it will be helpful for me everywhere where I am. I would like you to make an appointment with me. In addition to that, it will be useful for both of us to make a decision what time our course will be and how much it costs. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inquire about learning English
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language
from you. I work in our local newspaper as a reporter. I came across an
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English club for advanced levels
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find that you are the person I am looking for.
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I
am
absolutely
keen to study from native speakers like yourself. At this reason, I want you to enroll me to your high grade course. One of my reason learning English
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language
is that
next
year I am going to
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New York city
on my business.
However
, it demands me on
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awaring
of
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language
.
Obviously
, English is an international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
, although it will be helpful for me everywhere where I am. I would like you to
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make
an appointment with me.
In addition
to that, it will be useful for both of us to
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make
a decision what time our course will be and how much it costs. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
. Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you give. Write a letter to the teacher. In your letter say how you came to know about him. explain why you want to learn. aks What help they can offer you.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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