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Asking for Spanish classess

Asking for Spanish classess 6de60
Dear Mr Black I am writing to you inquire about Spanish lessons which you are conducting these days. I came across with the article on the daily newspaper which you given an advertisement on it and suddenly I noticed that you were the only person who I had been searching for. I really want to be engaged with the person who is the native speaker of the Spanish language. I hope you will take my wish into your consideration. Frankly, I am going to continue my study in Spain in the upcoming year so I have to train on my skills on this language. As you know, language abilities will be taken into consideration during transfer my studies to Spain. At this time a have basic knowledge and skill on speaking, writing and listening. I would be pleased to attend to your classess from the next week. Hopefully, you will accept my response. I look forward to your respond soon. Kind regards Farrux Berdiqulov
Dear Mr Black

I am writing to you inquire about Spanish lessons which you are conducting these days.

I came across with the article on the daily newspaper which you
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given
an advertisement on it and
suddenly
I noticed that you were the
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only
person who I had been searching for. I
really
want to
be engaged
with the person who is the native speaker of the Spanish language.
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I
hope you will take my wish into your consideration.

Frankly
, I am going to continue my study in Spain in the upcoming year
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so
I
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have to
train on my
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skills
on this language. As you know, language abilities will
be taken
into consideration during transfer my studies to Spain. At this time a have basic knowledge and
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skill
on speaking, writing and listening.

I would be
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pleased
to attend to your
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classess
from the
next
week.
Hopefully
, you will accept my response.

I look forward to your
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respond
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soon
.

Kind regards

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Farrux
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Berdiqulov
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IELTS letter Asking for Spanish classess

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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