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Asking for Spanish course

Asking for Spanish course k5V68
Dear Mr Black I am writing to you enquire about Spanish lessons which you are conducting these days. I came across with the article on the daily newspaper which you were written on it and suddenly I noticed that you were the only person who I had been searching for. I really want to be engaged with the person who is the native speaker of the Spanish language. I hope you will take my wish into your consideration. Frankly, I am going to continue my study in Spain in the upcoming year so I have to train on my skills on this language. As you know, language abilities will be taken into consideration during transfer my studies to Spain. At this time a have basic knowledge and skill on speaking, writing and listening. I would be very pleased being participated to your classess from the next week. I hope that positive answer will be given to me by your own. I look forward to your respond soon. Kind regards Farrux Berdiqulov
Dear Mr Black

I am writing to you
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about Spanish lessons which you are conducting these days.

I came across with the article on the daily newspaper which you
were written
on it and
suddenly
I noticed that you were the
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only
person who I had been searching for. I
really
want to
be engaged
with the person who is the native speaker of the Spanish language.
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I
hope you will take my wish into your consideration.

Frankly
, I am going to continue my study in Spain in the upcoming year
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so
I
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have to
train on my
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skills
on this language. As you know, language abilities will
be taken
into consideration during transfer my studies to Spain. At this time a have basic knowledge and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
on speaking, writing and listening.

I would be
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very
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pleased
being
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participated to
your
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classess
from the
next
week. I hope that
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positive
answer will be
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given
to me by your
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own
.

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I
look forward to your
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respond
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soon
.

Kind regards

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Farrux
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Berdiqulov

IELTS letter Asking for Spanish course

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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