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Asking information about your friend’s living place.

Asking information about your friend’s living place. aENqd
Dear my friend. How are you? Are you studying without any difficulties? What about your friends in addition to your host family? I am writing this letter to inquire your studying lifestyle become I am going to visit your town which you are studying. You know, I have recently taken an exam and achieved money for spending time in abroad become of this I want to choose your town and have been strongly desiring to watch its historical buildings and monuments for my early childhood and My dream is about to coming true near future. Moreover I should inquire an information where I can stay whether a hotel or a temporary accommodation. Please write me which is suitable for staying and its facilities. Besides that what kind of evening entertainments hold there and can you recommend me is it possible for me spending time? I would be grateful if you could send a letter as soon as possible after knowing all information I will take a ticket for flying. Best wishes. Angela Joe.
Dear my friend. How are you? Are you studying without any difficulties? What about your friends
in addition
to your host family? I am writing this letter to inquire your studying lifestyle become I am going to visit your town which you are studying. You know, I have recently taken an exam and achieved money for spending time in abroad become of this I want to choose your town and have been
strongly
desiring to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
its historical buildings and monuments for my early childhood and My dream is about to coming true near future.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Moreover
I should inquire an information where I can stay whether a hotel or
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "temporary accommodation".
a temporary accommodation
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
write me which is suitable for staying and its facilities.
Besides
that what kind of evening entertainments hold there and can you recommend me is it possible for me spending time? I would be grateful if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a letter as
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soon
as possible after knowing all information I will take a ticket for flying. Best wishes. Angela Joe.
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IELTS letter Asking information about your friend’s living place.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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