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You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Say how you came to know about him/her. Explain why you want to learn. Ask what help they can offer.

You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Say how you came to know about him/her. Explain why you want to learn. Ask what help they can offer. DNxJ6
Dear Sir, I am writing to enquire about participating an English course from you. I have heard about you from the telegram channel which can help to increase substantially English skills of learners. That is why, l am particularly eager to learn from a highly experienced teacher like yourself. First of all, my priority of learning this foreign language is to take C1 certificate from CEFR as soon as possible. Secondly, l would be really interested in improving my English skills dramatically. Moreover, it would be grateful if you could give detail information about how l can learn easily and fast from your distance learning systems. l study at university in pair weeks, so it would be better if lessons were organized in odd weekdays. Please, could you tell me how much you charge for tuition in a month? l look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards, Miss Angel
Dear Sir,

I am writing to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about participating an English course from you.

I have heard about you from the telegram channel which can
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help
to increase
substantially
English
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skills
of learners.
That is
why, l am
particularly
eager to learn from a
highly
experienced teacher like yourself.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, my priority of learning this foreign language is to take C1 certificate from CEFR as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.
Secondly
, l would be
really
interested in improving my English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
dramatically
.

Moreover
, it would be grateful if you could give detail information about how l can learn
easily
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
from your distance learning systems.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
l
study at university in pair weeks,
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so
it would be better if lessons
were organized
in odd weekdays.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
, could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me how much you charge for tuition in a month?

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
l
look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Kind regards,

Miss Angel

IELTS letter You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Say how you came to know about him/her. Explain why you want to learn. Ask what help they can offer.

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150 words
6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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