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Tell about Tet holiday in your country

Tell about Tet holiday in your country VrxRA
Hi Jane, We haven't seen each other due to the epidemic, I'm glad to receive your letter. Vietnam is famous for its several holiday and festival, especially Tet holiday. In this time, not only me but also everyone in our country who return and reunite with families. We watching TV, eating Chung cake and talking about what happened in this year, some families will go to the temple another go to the church.
Hi Jane, We haven't
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seen
each other due to the epidemic, I'm glad to receive your letter. Vietnam is
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famous
for its
Possible agreement error. The noun holiday seems to be countable; consider using: "several holidays".
several holiday
and festival,
especially
Tet holiday. In this time, not
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only
me
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but
also
everyone in our country who return and reunite with families.
Did you mean "We're watching", "We are watching", or "We were watching"?
We watching
TV, eating Chung cake and talking about what happened in this year,
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some
families will go to the temple another go to the church.
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IELTS letter Tell about Tet holiday in your country

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  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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