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Explaining charts of damage done by students

Explaining charts of damage done by students W5QmK

Dear Sir/madam, I am jetendra writing this letter to bring to your notice regarding the damage made by some of the adolescents. I have done some research on the school spending of 20 years and picked 3 out of them to give in breif regarding the explanation. Here I am considering year 1981, where 15%, 2 % is for our furniture & equipment and insurance, let us consider this is our starting investment. lf we the year 1991 its only 5% and 3 %, this means they have maintained good in this decade. But the problem is next decade we have spent 23 %, 8% for furniture and insurance which makes sure that there is more damage happend, besides it affected on workers salary and books purchase. I hope by considering above stats we need to take some action regarding these cases.

Dear Sir/madam,

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some
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 regarding the explanation.

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let
 us consider this is our starting investment. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLf
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 the problem is next
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 on workers salary and books This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
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 action regarding these cases. 