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Write a letter to the teacher.In the letter say how you came to know about him her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer

Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter say how you came to know about him her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer 5Al8D
Dear miss SofiaI am writing to enquire about taking Korean lessons with you. I read an article about you at the local daily newspaper. I really need your help. You are only person I am looking for. I am specially intent to learn from a native speaker like yourself so l do hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for some lessons. My reason for wanting to learn your language is because I will organise my own company together foreign countries. I desire arrange relation other foreign countries, especially Korean companies. I really want to be able to talk to the foreigners understand them. So Korean conversation is my priority. I would be grateful if you allow me know what aviability you have. Twice a week would be ideal and convinent for me. I work in the evening so daytime would be fine. Please could you also tell me what you charge for tutition and how long each lesson would last? Hope to hear from you soon. Regards. Patrick Brown.
Dear miss
SofiaI
am
writing to
enquire
about taking Korean lessons with you. I read an article about you at the local daily newspaper. I
really
need your
help
. You are
only
person I am looking for. I am
specially
intent to learn from a native speaker like yourself
so
l do hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for
some
lessons. My reason for wanting to learn your language is
because
I will
organise
my
own
company
together foreign countries. I desire arrange relation other foreign countries,
especially
Korean
companies
. I
really
want to be able to talk to the foreigners understand them.
So
Korean conversation is my priority. I would be grateful if you
allow
me know what
aviability
you have. Twice a week would be ideal and
convinent
for me. I work in the evening
so
daytime would be fine.
Please
could you
also
tell
me what you charge for
tutition
and how long each lesson would last? Hope to hear from you
soon
. Regards. Patrick Brown.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter say how you came to know about him her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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