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Letter for Giving Information

Letter for Giving Information W5kAb
Dear Mr JohnsanI am writing to giving information about online course which I have seen in the channel of Telegram in the morning, It would be more crucial benefit for our Company in the future. It is said that They have organised online training course to prepare young managers of company who are going to set up their own business. Adminstration of the course have planned E- lessons for a two months, According to considering of clients' lacking of time in modern and fast life. Futhermore, Plans of Online course includes in practical and theoritical lessons to be efficient for their Manager. From my point of view, It would be great choice for our Company, If you would attend in the course of online. In the other words, To achieve success and financial imcome of business firm, You must learn their knowledge, experience and practice which They are using to teach same of You professional managers, to be one of the well skilled managers among others. It would be more useful, If you would receive my information about this online course because we have demand like business class to achieve the highest position next life of firm. Your faithfully Ann!
Dear Mr
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JohnsanI
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing to giving information about
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online
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course
which I have
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seen
in the channel of Telegram in the morning, It would be more crucial benefit for our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Company
in the future. It
is said
that They have
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organised
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online
training
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course
to prepare young
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managers
of
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company
who are going to set up their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
business.
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Adminstration
of the
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course
have planned E- lessons for a two months, According to considering of clients' lacking of time in modern and
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fast
life.
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Futhermore
, Plans of
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Online
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course
includes in practical and
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theoritical
lessons to be efficient for their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Manager
. From my point of view, It would be great choice for our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Company
, If you would attend in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
. In the other words, To achieve success and financial
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imcome
of business firm, You
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
learn their knowledge, experience and practice which They are using to teach same of You professional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
managers
, to be one of the well skilled
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
managers
among others. It would be more useful, If you would receive my information about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
we have demand like business
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
to achieve the highest position
next
life of firm. Your
faithfully
Ann!
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IELTS letter Letter for Giving Information

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
200 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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