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Bad restaurant Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter, describe what made your experience negative describe what would have made the experience better ask him for an apology and a refund

Bad restaurant Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter, describe what made your experience negative describe what would have made the experience better ask him for an apology and a refund ApAWl
A couple of days ago, I had the worst situation when my family and I had dinner at your restaurant. Firstly, when I booked the table near a/the window two weeks ago, I asked the manager twice about confirming my order and he said, “Yes, sure. We are waiting for you and your family. ” However, that evening, to my surprise, another manager told me that our table was not ready yet and they could suggest to us the outdoor terrace. It is ridiculous! Secondly, after forty minutes we were transferred to our booked table, but the level of service was low. The waiter was a newcomer and he did not know the menu and the ingredients of the dishes. My cousin has a peanut allergy and she asked the waiter if the food contains this, because it is really important for her life and health. Unfortunately, the waiter brought two plates of fish and some other dishes, and in one of them were peanut crumbs. My cousin felt out of breath and she had such a red face, and we were afraid for her. I am glad to add that the staff of the restaurant called emergency services fast and they saved my sister. In summary, I think you need to resolve various problems in your restaurant. First of all, it is the manager’s job to help customers, book tables and prepare for guests, so I expected better service when I arrived. Secondly, you should make sure that the waitresses have professional skills, knowledge of the menu and the composition of the products, because someone could die. I am forced to ask you to refund the money after this negative experience and I want you to pay for my cousin’s medical bills. I hope to get an apology and an answer to my email. Sincerely, Sofia Z.
A couple of days ago, I had the worst situation when my family and I had dinner at your restaurant.
Firstly
, when I booked the
table
near a/the window two weeks ago, I asked the manager twice about confirming my
order and
he said, “Yes, sure. We are waiting for you and your family. ”
However
, that evening, to my surprise, another manager
told
me that our
table
was not ready
yet and
they could suggest to us the outdoor terrace. It is ridiculous!
Secondly
, after forty minutes we
were transferred
to our booked
table
,
but
the level of service was low. The waiter was a
newcomer and
he did not know the menu and the ingredients of the dishes. My cousin has a peanut
allergy and
she asked the waiter if the food contains this,
because
it is
really
important
for her life and health.

Unfortunately, the waiter brought two plates of fish and
some
other dishes, and in one of them were peanut crumbs. My cousin felt out of
breath and
she had such a red face, and we were afraid for her. I am glad to
add
that the staff of the restaurant called emergency services
fast and
they saved my sister.

In summary, I
think
you need to resolve various problems in your restaurant.
First of all
, it is the manager’s job to
help
customers, book
tables
and prepare for guests,
so
I
expected
better service when I arrived.
Secondly
, you should
make
sure that the waitresses have professional
skills
, knowledge of the menu and the composition of the products,
because
someone could
die
.

I
am forced
to ask you to refund the money after this
negative
experience and I want you to pay for my cousin’s medical bills. I hope to
get
an apology and an answer to my email.

Sincerely
,

Sofia Z.
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IELTS letter Bad restaurant Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter, describe what made your experience negative describe what would have made the experience better ask him for an apology and a refund

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  American English
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308 words
6.0
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