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you want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher.

you want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. BJRWj
Dear Miss Ann, I am writing to inquire about taking German lessons with you. I read the article about you and saw your advert on internet and I think strongly that you are just a person I am looking for. I am particularly keen to learn from a native speaker like yourself so I hope that you have space in your time table to fit me in for some lessons. My reason for wanting to learn your language is because I will be travelled to Germany for a year to continue my studying as a second year student of master degree at University of Munich. I really want to be able to talk to the students, professors and understand them so German conversation is my priority. I would be thankful if you could let me know availability you have. Three times a week would be ideal if that is possible. I work in the mornings so evening time would be fine. Please, could you also tell me what you charge for tuition and how long each lesson would last. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards, Mark Brown
Dear Miss Ann,

I am writing to inquire about taking German lessons with you.

I read the article about you and
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saw
your advert on internet and I
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think
strongly
that you are
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just
a person I am looking for.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
particularly
keen to learn from a native speaker like yourself
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so
I hope that you have space in your time table to fit me in for
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some
lessons.

My reason for wanting to learn your language is
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because
I will
be travelled
to Germany for a year to continue my studying as a second year student of master degree at University of Munich. I
really
want to be able to talk to the students, professors and understand them
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
German conversation is my priority.

I would be thankful if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know availability you have. Three times a week would be ideal if
that is
possible. I work in the mornings
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so
evening time would be fine.
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Please
, could you
also
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tell
me what you charge for tuition and how long each lesson would last.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Kind regards,

Mark Brown
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IELTS letter you want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
190 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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