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You hsve borrowed something from your friend it has got damaged. informal letter

You hsve borrowed something from your friend it has got damaged. informal letter Nr9Bm

Dear John. I am writing to appologize for your projector which you gave me last week to use on my demo lesson. I am very grateful for your giving it to me. Your device was very helpful for our lesson and the lesson was very great and coloured with it, the students could see all cards on the screen it was unforgettable for them. But I am very regret for saying that your projector was broken because one of my students wanted to help me and carried the device but he fall down and your device is broken. Please don't be angry, I promise that I I will buy a new one in a month. I hope you will you accept my apologies. Yours sincerely Laura.

Dear John. I am writing to Possible spelling mistake found.apologize
appologize
 for your projector which you gave me last week to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 on my demo lesson. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful for your giving it to me. Your device was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 helpful for our lesson and the lesson was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 great and Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.colored
coloured
 with it, the students could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 all cards on the screen it was unforgettable for them. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 regret for saying that your projector was broken
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 one of my students wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me and carried the device This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "falls", "fell".fallsfell
fall
 down and your device is broken
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 don't be angry, I promise that Possible typo: you repeated a wordI
I I
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a new one in a month. I hope you will you accept my apologies. Yours sincerely
 Laura. 