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You hsve borrowed something from your friend it has got damaged. informal letter

You hsve borrowed something from your friend it has got damaged. informal letter Nr9Bm
Dear John. I am writing to appologize for your projector which you gave me last week to use on my demo lesson. I am very grateful for your giving it to me. Your device was very helpful for our lesson and the lesson was very great and coloured with it, the students could see all cards on the screen it was unforgettable for them. But I am very regret for saying that your projector was broken because one of my students wanted to help me and carried the device but he fall down and your device is broken. Please don't be angry, I promise that I I will buy a new one in a month. I hope you will you accept my apologies. Yours sincerely Laura.
Dear John. I am writing to
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appologize
for your projector which you gave me last week to
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use
on my demo lesson. I am
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very
grateful for your giving it to me. Your device was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
helpful for our lesson and the lesson was
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very
great and
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coloured
with it, the students could
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see
all cards on the screen it was unforgettable for them.
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But
I am
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very
regret for saying that your projector
was broken
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because
one of my students wanted to
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help
me and carried the device
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but
he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "falls", "fell".
fall
down and your device
is broken
.
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Please
don't be angry, I promise that
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I I
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a new one in a month. I hope you will you accept my apologies. Yours
sincerely
Laura.

IELTS letter You hsve borrowed something from your friend it has got damaged. informal letter

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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