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Letter to my best friend from US

Letter to my best friend from US MMRwp
Dear Thanks for your letter. Sorry, I have not written for some time. How are you? I am doing well. As you know that my dad works in a IT company, he gets transferred so often. Now this time he got transferred to Viena. He has to join as early as possible and so even we have to shift from here at the earliest. I am writing because I`m looking for summer job. You older than me offene work in summer. Could you recommend me something? I`m interest in jod because my camera was broken and I want buy the new one. I would like work as customer service in a bookshop or library assistant. Those kind of jobs are the best for me. I can meet new friends, improve my communicative skills and become a better version of myself. What do you think about this? Sorry, I have to stop now. I promise you that on winter vacation, I would visit the state and meet you. Don`t forget to give my present for your parents. Let`s keep in touch with you. With love
Dear

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work in summer. Could you recommend me something?
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jod
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I would like work as customer service in a bookshop or library assistant.
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of jobs are the best for me. I can
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new friends,
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my communicative
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skills
and become a better version of myself. What do you
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Sorry, I
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. I promise you that on winter vacation, I would visit the state and
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meet
you.
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forget to give my present for your parents.
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IELTS letter Letter to my best friend from US

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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