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Lost baggage at flight #1234

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Dear Sirs, I’m writing to you to request a help of finding my hand luggage that I left on the plane. It was flight #1234 from London to Vancouver on Wednesday 21st March. After I’d taken all my stuff, I went to the passport control, but I totally forgot about the bag. Here are some details: It is made of aluminium, black colored with white plastic angles. Inside this bag I had grey jacket, black pants, charging cable for iPhone, silver power bank, cookies, two bananas, and some documents. All of this (except the food) is extremely significant for me, so I would deeply appreciate if you could find my luggage and send it to my address: 9895 Santa Monica Blvd, Beverly Hills, CA 90210, United States. If you require any further information, don’t hesitate to ask me. I can give it. I look forward to your reply. Best regards, Sam Smith
Dear Sirs,

I’m writing to you to request a
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help
of finding my hand luggage that I
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left
on the
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plane
. It was flight #1234 from London to Vancouver on Wednesday 21st March. After I’d taken all my stuff, I went to the passport control,
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but
I
totally
forgot about the bag. Here are
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some
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details
:

It
is made
of
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aluminium
, black colored with white plastic angles. Inside this bag I had
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grey
jacket, black pants, charging cable for iPhone, silver power bank, cookies, two bananas, and
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some
documents. All of this (except the food) is
extremely
significant for me,
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so
I would
deeply
appreciate if you could find my luggage and
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send
it to my address: 9895 Santa Monica Blvd,
Beverly
Hills, CA 90210, United States.

If you require any
further
information, don’t hesitate to ask me. I can give it.

I look forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Sam Smith
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IELTS letter Lost baggage at flight #1234

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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