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Dear John I do hope this letter will find you in good health and spirits. I'm really very happy to hear your coming. I hope you and your family are well. I extremely sorry for reading your letter lately because nowadays I'm planning a big zoo project. So I need your help to import special animals. I couldn't find any animals in this area because there isn't any forests or dessert here. I think your hometown is near to nursery and you need to rent this animals for a month. After a week my zoo park building will be built. It is very big and I need more stuff and I think you can control my business. I want you my colleague. Our business will improve and world will know about us. It's my plan for the following week. It will be great with you. I hope to hear from you soon. I'm waiting your opinion hopefully. Your best friend Afzalbek.

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think
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think
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improve
 and world will know about us. It's my plan for the following week. It will be great with you. I hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
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