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Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant that is close to your house to complain about the noise.

Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant that is close to your house to complain about the noise. 6N9DB
Dear Mr Bing, I am writing in relation to the noise from your restaurant when your music band plays. They play so loud almost every evening from 21. 00 to 24. 00. I understand you need to attract your clients, but you should respect the needs and the comfort of the residents of this block. I work remotely as an engineer and it is essential to have silence so I can concentrate on my job. I even had to leave my apartment sometimes and work at a library when your band is playing. This makes me very uncomfortable and disturbed. There are not any coffee shops in our quarter, so maybe you should convert your restaurant into a coffee shop. I would love to go to this place every morning. Or you can change your band to a more relaxing background music, and turn down the volume on the columns. I hope that this situation will improve; otherwise, I'll have to appeal to a higher authority. Yours faithfully, Olga Genova
Dear Mr Bing,

I am writing in relation to the noise from your restaurant when your music band plays. They play
so
loud almost every evening from 21. 00 to 24. 00.

I understand you need to attract your clients,
but
you should respect the needs and the comfort of the residents of this block. I work
remotely
as an engineer and it is essential to have silence
so
I can concentrate on my job.
I
even had to
leave
my apartment
sometimes
and work at a library when your band is playing. This
makes
me
very
uncomfortable and disturbed.

There are not any coffee shops in our quarter,
so
maybe you should convert your restaurant into a coffee shop. I would
love
to go to this place every morning. Or you can
change
your band to a more relaxing background music, and turn down the volume on the columns.

I hope that this situation will
improve
;
otherwise
, I'll
have to
appeal to a higher authority.

Yours
faithfully
,

Olga
Genova
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant that is close to your house to complain about the noise.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
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