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A Family Event Thas Was Special For me

A Family Event Thas Was Special For me wnENY

Dear friend, Hi Dearie. I'm fine also my family members are fine too and hope the same from you. You know i arranged a suprise event for a person in my family. Can you guess who is it? ? . . Ok no problem I will tell who it is. . The party is for my cute cousin. She came from Bangalore after a long time. I missed her a lot and to celebrate her presence in my family I arranged the event. The event was filled with games, chocolates, cakes. . ofcourse also my family members. . The event held in my home yesterday. Yesterday was one of my favourite day only cause of my cousin. . . . I was happy and enjoyed myself thoroughly. . . even everyone enjoyed the event. The event was fully decorated with ballons & flowers and cake even. . It was wonderful. . none of my family members knew about this event. . They all came to know about this event when my cousin arrived to my home. They all were shocked and appreciated me for this wonderful event. My cousin even felt happy and her eyes filled with tears by seeing hose decoration. . After those moments we started to take photos selfie etc etc. . I just wanted to share this to you. . ok bye take care. . love you my dearie. I'm waiting. .

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