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You want to go camping for a week with a family

You want to go camping for a week with a family p51B9

Dear Sir or Madam, Subject: Request for information regarding Camp Site Hope you are doing great. I happen to learn from your Facebook page that you have an exciting offer for families who want to visit your camp site between 15th May to 30th May. We are a family of 3 including a toddler and we plan to visit your campsite from 17th May to 20th May. As I need to plan my trip. I request you to share a family package for 3 members including accommodation, food and safari with best possible discounted cost along with option to customize our package based on other available options. If you can kindly share all the do’s and don’t’s, so that we can make necessary arrangements and prepare ourselves accordingly. We want to make this trip special and me and my wife are celebrating our 3rd marriage anniversary and we want to celebrate. Thanks and Regards, MV Kartik

Dear Sir or Madam,

Subject: Request for information regarding Camp Site

Hope you are doing great.

I happen to learn from your Facebook page that you have an exciting offer for families who want to visit your camp site between 15th May to 30th May.

We are a family of 3 including a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).toddler, and
toddler and
 we plan to visit your campsite from 17th May to 20th May. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I need to plan my trip. I request you to share a family package for 3 members including accommodation, food and safari A determiner is probably missing here: "with the best".with the best
with best
 possible discounted cost along with option to customize our package based on other available options. If you can kindly share all the Do not use 's with a verb. Did you mean "does"?does
do’s
 and don’t’s, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 necessary arrangements and prepare ourselves accordingly
.

We want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this trip special and me and my wife are celebrating our 3rd Wedding anniversaries are the proper term to describe the anniversary of the day of a wedding.wedding
marriage
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).anniversary, and
anniversary and
 we want to celebrate.

Thanks and Regards,

MV Possible spelling mistake found.MartinKatieKartArtieKariKarin
Kartik