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Write a letter to the company who sold you items

Write a letter to the company who sold you items EldEL
Dear Sir or Madam, Last Monday I ordered a cover for my HTC phone from your eCommerce website. I was excited when it arrived but very disappointed to find that the product was not as promised and totally unusable. I am hoping you will replace it. In relation to the specifics of the order, I purchased this leather cover through your website called Electric Gadgets on November 08th using my PayPal account. The order number is 2584205 and I am attaching a copy of my receipt with this letter. The issue with the cover is that it is not a genuine leather product and I am unable to store my phone inside it securely. The picture of the item on your website clearly shows the cover supports the HTC Desire 12+ model and is an original leather product. So I’m sure this is a manufacturing flaw. As a solution, and because I really like the design and look of the cover, I am hoping that you will agree to replace it with a new and genuine one for free. Otherwise, I would like a full refund and I will be contacting PayPal complaints if I do not hear back from you in regards to this within a week. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully, John Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

Last Monday I ordered a
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cover
for my
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HTC
phone from your
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eCommerce
website. I
was excited
when it arrived
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but
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very
disappointed to find that the product was not as promised and
totally
unusable. I am hoping you will replace it.

In relation to the specifics of the order, I
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purchased
this leather
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cover
through your website called Electric Gadgets on November 08th using my PayPal account. The order number is
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2584205 and
I am attaching a copy of my receipt with this letter.

The issue with the
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cover
is that it is not a genuine leather
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product and
I am unable to store my phone inside it
securely
.
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The
picture of the item on your website
clearly
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shows
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cover
supports the
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HTC
Desire 12+ model and is an original leather product.
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So
I’m sure this is a manufacturing flaw.

As a solution, and
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because
I
really
like the design and look of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cover
, I am hoping that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to replace it with a new and genuine one for free.
Otherwise
, I would like a full refund and I will be contacting PayPal complaints if I do not hear back from you
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
this within a week.

Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

John Smith
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the company who sold you items

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
227 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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