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You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you about a minor accident that I had to face while shopping at your supermarket, Reliance Fresh, yesterday. My name is Waseem, a regular customer of your chain store. Around 2 pm yesterday, I was grocery shopping at Reliance Fresh. I slipped and fell when I was driving my cart along the frozen foods aisle. My elbow and back were in pain. After I got up, I noticed that the cause of the accident was a leaky refrigerator. One of the fridges near the end of the aisle were leaking water badly. I urgently requested one of your employees to clean the floor and place a caution sign at the area to prevent other shoppers from hurting themselves. I have never experienced such carelessness in the shop before and I hope that the staffs become more alert and proactive in the future. Please replace the leaking refrigerators as soon as possible. I suggest your staffs carry out daily routine checks of all the electronics prior to opening the shop because if they detect any abnormalities, they can act on it straight away thereby preventing any unforeseen injuries to customers. On top of that, maintenance should be carried out more frequently. I hope you will give your immediate attention to this matter. Thank you in advance for your cooperation. Yours faithfully, Mohammed Waseem

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about a minor accident that I had to face while shopping at your supermarket, Reliance Fresh, yesterday. My name is Possible spelling mistake found.SeemWasteWashedWastedWastesWasher
Waseem
, a regular customer of your chain store.

Around 2 pm yesterday, I was grocery shopping at Reliance Fresh. I slipped and fell when I was driving my cart along the frozen Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "foods'" or "food's"?foods'food's
foods
 aisle. My elbow and back were in pain. After I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 up, I noticed that the cause of the accident was a leaky refrigerator. One of the fridges near the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the aisle were leaking water badly
. I urgently
 requested one of your employees to clean the floor and place a caution This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 at the area to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 other shoppers from hurting themselves.

I have never experienced such carelessness in the shop This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and I hope that the staffs become more alert and proactive in the future. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 replace the leaking refrigerators as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. I suggest your staffs carry out daily routine This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
checks
 of all the electronics prior to opening the shop This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 if they detect any abnormalities, they can act on it straight away thereby preventing any unforeseen injuries to customers. On top of that
, maintenance should be carried
 out more frequently
.

I hope you will give your immediate attention to this matter. Thank you in advance for your cooperation.

Yours faithfully
,

Mohammed Possible spelling mistake found.SeemWasteWashedWastedWastesWasher
Waseem