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IELTS informal letter writing

IELTS informal letter writing NmyeN
Dear John, Hope you are well! First of all, I would like to thank you for arranging such a fantastic vacation in Sydney. That was the most memorable outing I have gone so far. It was so joyful to meet all our friends after so long time. Well! I know you are pretty much aware of my absence of mind; I am writing to let you know that I forgot my brown colour wallet in your flat when I stayed there during the holiday. Hope you remember the day when I was leaving back for Singapore, Since I am running late to catch my flight, I packed all my belongings in a hurry and was least conscious about my purse. I’d really appreciate it if you could courier my purse to my residential address as soon as you can. It is an easy mail process if you utilize the DTDC mailing service. Please visit the DTDC mailing service nearby your flat, make sure to pack the wallet nicely in a small cardboard box. Once the packing is done, make sure you write down my residential address clearly in block letters along with my full name and mobile number and hand over the pack to the mailing person to initiate the courier process. Sorry to trouble you for my misstep mate! I’m really looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Sunanda
Dear John,

Hope you are well!
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I would like to thank you for arranging such a fantastic vacation in Sydney. That was the most memorable outing I have gone
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
far. It was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
joyful to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
all our friends after
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
long time.

Well! I know you are pretty much aware of my absence of mind; I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I forgot my brown
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
wallet in your flat when I stayed there during the holiday. Hope you remember the day when I was leaving back for Singapore, Since I am running late to catch my flight, I packed all my belongings in a hurry and was least conscious about my purse.

I’d
really
appreciate it if you could courier my purse to my residential address as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as you can. It is an easy mail process if you utilize the
Possible spelling mistake found.
DTDC
mailing service.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
visit the
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DTDC
mailing service nearby your flat,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure to pack the wallet
nicely
in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
cardboard box. Once the packing
is done
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure you write down my residential address
clearly
in block letters along with my full name and mobile number and hand over the pack to the mailing person to initiate the courier process.

Sorry to trouble you for my misstep mate! I’m
really
looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Sunanda
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IELTS letter IELTS informal letter writing

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
230 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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