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Write about some ways to get rid of bad habits

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At all times, all over the world, humans are living by their habits. Our behaviors have been able to become our habits, because we are repeating our behaviors again and again every day. The habits can be good or bad. In this essay, I try to put forward some possible solutions to get rid of bad habits. Several solutions have been suggested. To my mind, the first and foremost solution is that, we should really want to change our bad habits. Many times, despite the fact that, people are completely aware of the negative impact of the bad habits, they continue to do bad habits. In this situation, there is no magic bullet for bad habits. For example, some people smoke, it is a bad habit. They completely know serious effects of smoking on the health, but they do not quit smoking because they do not want to. So, the decision to give up the bad habits is the first step. The next solution is that, sometimes we want to quit our bad habits, but there is no easy answers to bad habit`s problem. We have been trying many ways to solve this problem for a long time, but we have not yet come up with an answer. So we need help. We can use the experience of others, search on the internet and read the related articles. Generally, we can get information on getting rid of bad habits. The final solution is that, if we cannot still find ideal remedies, we will need to visit the psychologists and follow their advice. They usually recommend that it is better to replace our bad habits with a healthier behavior. According to the explanation above, to get rid of bad habits, we need to have the motivation for change and try the effective long-term solutions. We should believe we will be able to find a prescription for dealing with this problem. Generally, we have to accept that takes a long time to quit our bad habits. These habits have not been created in one day, so we should not expect to eliminate them simply and immediately. It is better we give ourselves enough time. We should not forget that we are not the only person in the world that has bad habits. We should not put ourselves under pressure for our bad habits. We should not become nervous about our bad habits. To sum up, not only do we need to be more patient about the answer to this problem, but we also need to increase information on the ways to quit bad habits. I believe, on the basis of the above solutions, bad habit problems can be solved. I am sure we are capable of getting rid of bad habits.
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, they continue to do
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. In this situation, there is no magic bullet for
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For example
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people
smoke, it is a
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. They completely know serious effects of smoking on the health,
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they do not
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smoking
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solution
is that, if we cannot
still
find ideal remedies, we will
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to visit the psychologists and follow their advice. They
usually
recommend that it is better to replace our
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bad
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with a healthier behavior.

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, we
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to have the motivation for
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and try the effective long-term
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problem
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