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you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Suggest how your friend could help you find a job ORXeG

Dear John, Hope this postcard finds you doing great! I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be there soon at your place as I got my study visa for Canada. I enroll in the Bachelor of Arts at Toronto University and I guess you are attaining a degree from the same university. It would really assist me with your accompany. Especially, It would be appreciated if you could cooperate in the search for a job, as you are aware that I belong to a middle-class family and my parents have a huge pressure of loans installments. Previously, you wrote a mail to me in which you had mentioned about your short-term job at the restaurant. Whereas, my search is also in the part-time job particular and you must be a good campaign in this. I hope you would surely assist me in the strange city. See you soon, Amandeep PS- Flight will reach at 4 pm on Monday dated 15 October.

Dear John,

Hope this postcard finds you doing great!

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be there This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 at your place as I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my study visa for Canada. I enroll in the Bachelor of Arts at Toronto University and I guess you are attaining a degree from the same university. It would really
 assist me with your accompany.

Especially
, It would be appreciated
 if you could cooperate in the search for a job, as you are aware that I belong to a middle-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 family and my parents have a huge pressure of loans installments.

Previously, you wrote a mail to me in which you had Did you mean simply "mentioned your"? You do not need the word "about" here.mentioned your
mentioned about your
 short-term job at the restaurant. Whereas, my search is also
 in the part-time job particular and you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 campaign in this. I hope you would surely
 assist me in the strange city.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
,

Amandeep

PS- Flight will reach at 4 pm on Monday dated 15 October. 