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you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Suggest how your friend could help you find a job ORXeG
Dear John, Hope this postcard finds you doing great! I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be there soon at your place as I got my study visa for Canada. I enroll in the Bachelor of Arts at Toronto University and I guess you are attaining a degree from the same university. It would really assist me with your accompany. Especially, It would be appreciated if you could cooperate in the search for a job, as you are aware that I belong to a middle-class family and my parents have a huge pressure of loans installments. Previously, you wrote a mail to me in which you had mentioned about your short-term job at the restaurant. Whereas, my search is also in the part-time job particular and you must be a good campaign in this. I hope you would surely assist me in the strange city. See you soon, Amandeep PS- Flight will reach at 4 pm on Monday dated 15 October.
Dear John,

Hope this postcard finds you doing great!

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be there
soon
at your place as I
got
my study visa for Canada. I enroll in the Bachelor of Arts at Toronto University and I guess you are attaining a degree from the same university. It would
really
assist me with your accompany.

Especially
, It would
be appreciated
if you could cooperate in the search for a job, as you are aware that I belong to a middle-
class
family and my parents have a huge pressure of loans installments.

Previously, you wrote a mail to me in which you had
mentioned about your
short-term job at the restaurant. Whereas, my search is
also
in the part-time job particular and you
must
be a
good
campaign in this. I hope you would
surely
assist me in the strange city.

See
you
soon
,

Amandeep

PS- Flight will reach at 4 pm on Monday dated 15 October.
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IELTS letter you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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