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You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference- product launch Why you want your colleague to give presentation- an efficient employee to give presentation What arrangement will you do for this conference- Equipment, space for conference

You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference- product launch Why you want your colleague to give presentation- an efficient employee to give presentation What arrangement will you do for this conference- Equipment, space for conference no0e

Dear Mr. Jones, I am writing this letter to request you to provide presentation in the upcoming conference. As you are completely cognizant of the new product launch that our company is going to have through this conference, therefore, we need to prepare an attractive and effective presentation on our new product. Providing further details about the conference, it is going to be held at Hotel ‘The Nook’ on April 1, 2021. The reason why I have chosen you to present in the public is because, first of all, you are an efficient employee in the Marketing department. I have heard plethora of praises and recognitions about your commendable presentation skills. Secondly, as you have involved in all discussions and meetings about the new product, thus, you might be having adequate information about how our new launch functions and its other features. As for the arrangement of the presentation, I will ensure that all required equipment is available for you. What is more, I have already booked a conference room in the Hotel. Most importantly, I will also email you all the details of specifics of our new product so that you could get ready well in advance Should you require any further information or want to ask anything, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours truly, Daizy D.

Dear Mr. Jones,

I am writing this letter to request you to provide You use this word too often, consider replacing it withofferingsubmissionshowintroductionappearancedelivery
presentation
 in the upcoming conference.

As you are completely cognizant of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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product
 launch that our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is going to have through this conference, therefore
, we need to prepare an attractive and effective You use this word too often, consider replacing it withofferingsubmissionshowintroductionappearancedelivery
presentation
 on our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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product
. Providing further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about the conference, it is going to be held
 at Hotel ‘The Nook’ on April 1, 2021.

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because
, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
, you are an efficient employee in the Marketing department. I have heard plethora of praises and recognitions about your commendable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withofferingsubmissionshowintroductionappearancedelivery
presentation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. Secondly
, as you have involved in all discussions and meetings about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
, thus
, you might be having adequate information about how our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 launch functions and its other features.

As for the arrangement of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withofferingsubmissionshowintroductionappearancedelivery
presentation
, I will ensure that all required equipment is available for you. What is more
, I have already booked a conference room in the Hotel. Most importantly
, I will also
 email you all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of specifics of our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 ready well in Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphadvance.advance!advance?advance:advance,advance;
advance


Should you require any further
 information or want to ask anything, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours truly
,

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Daizy
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