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Letter of Vacation Photos recieved

Letter of Vacation Photos recieved 2806
Dear Rohit & Suraj, Hope this letter finds you both in the best of health and spirits. Today morning I received few pictures of our most cherished holiday to Dubai last month. At the outset, Thank you for the most memorable holiday and pictures as a symbol of remembrance. I must say, not only I was mesmerized to view them but also upset that I miss you both. The most astonishing view of the Burj Khalifa from the 168th Floor was captured by your camera which I will hang it on the wall in my living room. The memories always stay with us. I would like to apologize that I could not pen down to both of you after our vacation. The pile of unfinished assignments at work accumulated has been keeping me completely occupied. The most difficult part after any trip is to gather yourself and bring 100% back on the track. No more excuses, however this has been the reason of procrastinating my letter to you. I am glad and always thank God that I have fabulous friends like both of you. The time we spent together will always be remembered by me. If given an option I would love to meet both of you on every weekend. Having said that, it would be great to have both of you come to my place for a short trip during the next long weekend starting from 2nd April to 6th April. Either we can watch movies or go for trekking together during this time. Anyways, look forward to hearing from you. With love, Sunny Tapadar
Dear Rohit & Suraj,

Hope this letter finds you both in the best of health and spirits.

Today morning
I received few pictures of our most cherished holiday to Dubai last month. At the outset, Thank you for the most memorable holiday and pictures as a symbol of remembrance. I
must
say, not
only
I
was mesmerized
to view them
but
also
upset that I miss you both. The most astonishing view of the
Burj
Khalifa from the 168th Floor
was captured
by your camera which I will hang it on the wall in my living room. The memories always stay with us.

I would like to apologize that I could not pen down to both of you after our vacation. The pile of unfinished assignments at work accumulated has been keeping me completely occupied. The most difficult part after any trip is to gather yourself and bring 100% back on the
track
. No more excuses,
however
this has been the reason of procrastinating my letter to you.

I am glad and always thank God that I have fabulous friends like both of you. The time we spent together will always
be remembered
by me.
If
given
an option I would
love
to
meet
both of you on every weekend. Having said that, it would be great to have both of you
come
to my place for a short trip during the
next
long weekend starting from 2nd April to 6th April. Either we can
watch
movies or go for trekking together during this time.

Anyways, look forward to hearing from you.

With
love
,

Sunny
Tapadar
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IELTS letter Letter of Vacation Photos recieved

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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